There was a sparkling in my eyes when i met you
But now all i can see is the color blue
I'm sitting here missing something true
Missing someone i once knew
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You finishing each line very delicately, the rhyme so nice and perfectly done complete with the exact emotion as it supposed to be inside the poem...this is a fine textured poem Ghina! even it sad but i am happy reading great poem...but the sad mix the feelings :) _Unwritten Soul
Very deep and so sad poem but the melody of the real love that comes from the heart is so clear that I can feel it here and it gave a nice taste to this poem. I like it it wish you all the best!
Is it not foolish to have a love of true it lies many things & ignores many more as it real happening many sort in life like it too. give up all to Allah & make passion with him you may have a beautiful life here & ever Ĺive a life stiĺl it makes you