Thursday, March 27, 2014

Ending Other's Lives Comments

Rating: 5.0

We love a newborn baby
Like it has been a part of us forever
Love is precious
To watch a loved one die, is unbearable
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Lyn Paul
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Michael Walker 28 September 2019

'Life is not a countdown to death'. That is how I see it, although it can seem like a countdown in unhappy times. I shudder at the thought of killing in wars, and, even more, capital punishment.

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Chinedu Dike 15 March 2017

Brave utterances set aside for honest reflection. Confronting piece of poetry depicting savagery written with spiritual insight. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 April 2016

Let us all live in peace! Nice piece of work.

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Mark Dillon 06 April 2014

I guess we have to experience some darkness to relish the light. The world is and can be a very dark place, but there are still a lot if shining rays of light and hope just like you. Shine on.

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Louis Rams 04 April 2014

many people welcome death as a release and have become cold inside to the feelings of losing a loved one, and some rejoice because you are going to a better place.

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Hazel Durham 02 April 2014

Such a powerful message to put an end to all evil that takes our lives, our children and our families that takes our hope for a better future. If we stand together and help and care for each other allow our true goodness to flourish and to silence evil people forever! A thought provoking and beautiful write Lyn!

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Yash Shinde 30 March 2014

In this century Let us not fight for freedom Let us all live Life is not a Countdown to death Life is precious For us all No matter who we are Who are these people Ending life ....Your poem delivers a beautiful message...loved this one

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