Wednesday, July 19, 2006

: (Ending In Death! ! ! Comments

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You said you were always there
You said you would never leave me
Now I know that was all a lie
You never cared at all
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Reshma Ramesh 24 March 2009

deep and a sad poem of a broken heart well penned

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Melvina Germain 16 September 2006

Oh yes, I'm so sorry, I should have also mentioned that Death is not an ending, it is a (BEGINNING) .--Melvina

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Melvina Germain 16 September 2006

Very good poem-It all depends who 'You' is referring to, if it is a lover, well hmmm, however if it is God, well of course he's there, he would never leave you, he would carry you through your trying times. If you personally had those thoughts of which you write, then you know that to be true, becasue you were able to write this poem. So, where is God, He's everywhere.

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