Ending For A Beginning............ Comments

A great poem! One has to leave and vacate the space for another to come and stay. Come and go____This is th name of the game. I love your theme, poet! Very well constructed poem to be rated for 10. Thank you.

Yes..... the old has to pave for the young! If the old continue to live, there won't be room for the young ones on Earth. This is applicable to everything! Yellowing leaves must wither for a new spring. The sun must set for a new dawn of fresh promises! You have beautifully put an unquestionable rule of Nature in a crisp and meaningful poem. A 10

The old has to give way to the new! Unless a seed disintegrates in the soil, new life will not sprout! Only with a sun set, there can be a sunrise! These are all unwritten laws of Nature! You have convincingly presented the inevitability of death!

The cyclical nature of life is pervasive. Thanks, Jayatissa

Very interesting, amazing and thought provoking poem on life and death shared really. This has wide vision and nice questions raised. A fresh day dawn with new sun rise is waiting for you. Nice sharing...10