Monday, November 5, 2007

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I shoot out angular
A mass of points and
Stark straight lines
To stick you with my urgency
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Jennifer Hartman
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L M 08 July 2008

Very interesting Jennifer. I especially liked your night/day-type contrasts (such as sunshine and rain storm. It isn't a simple poem, but you make it sound as though it were.

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Madison Riley 11 November 2007

such contrast...emotional toil. This is beautiful Jen!

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