Ending Comments

Plenty of truth said in few words 10++

There comes a point of saturation in every relationship and the poems depicts that point. Wonderful! !

Every pertinent detail of a relationship in just 20 short and straightforward words. A whole story in 22 syllables. Every unspoken adjective adds a certain poignancy to the third line and the word 'nothing'. And... how does it end? A truly intriguing and seemingly subversive little poem. S :)