Thursday, June 29, 2017

Endeavor To Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

I do not love you like my favorite food.
Or like a beautiful view.
I do not love you for your attraction or your value.
I do not love you for your worth.
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Suzanne Hayasaki
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Rebecca Navarre 30 July 2017

Wow! ! ! ! ! You've Written The Words Of Love So Beautiful! ! ! ! ! So Perfectly! ! ! ! ! ... This Touches So, Very Deep! ! ! ! ! With Such Compassion It Speaks! ! ! ! ! Can't Put Into Words, , , ((How Beautiful! ! ! ! ! !)) Thank You So Much For Sharing Such A Heart Warming Poem! ! ! ! ! Ever So Very Many....10S! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Unnikrishnan E S 30 June 2017

Hi Suzanne, A profound poem., expressing the value of compassion, love for our fellow-beings. Very interesting, quite poetic expressions. Good choice of vocabulary. The best lines in the poem: In all of our mutual fragility And I feel the energy that flows. True, I have just read this poem, And I feel the energy that flows. A full ten..

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Suzanne Hayasaki 30 June 2017

Thank you! If you can feel the energy of the poem, I must have done something right!

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Menomonee Falls, WI, USA
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