Thursday, July 5, 2012

Endangered Species: The Moon Comments

Rating: 4.0

Dear Moon,
Old faithful friend
of lovers and romantics,
you are our nearest celestial body,
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Paul Hartal
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Anat Tour 06 July 2012

A delightful poem. I really hope the moon will be left alone and will always smile back at Earth.

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Kevin Patrick 05 July 2012

What an enchanting besieging work, at first I read this as a literal description of the moon, but I can see untertones of something more meaningful then that. The moon inspires great works about love, if we were to loose her what mysteries of the nights would we have to look at, but the distant stars. Great work Paul, much appreciated

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