Monday, November 13, 2017

Endangered Life Comments

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I want to reduce the ages,
The centuries, the years,
The months, the days,
The hours, minutes, seconds,
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smita sun 15 January 2018

great feelings....heart throbbing....keep it up

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 November 2017

Death is inevitable. One can't reduce his age nor years, days, minutes and seconds to avoid the death to remain without fear. Body is mortal and death can easily capture it but soul is immortal that can't be destroyed. So if we will be soul conscious only then we will be free from fear of death. It is a beautiful philosophical poem on life and death having touching expression. Thank u dear Abhi...

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Saji G Praleyagiri 25 November 2017

Dear poet, death is a reality.A nice poem.Thak U. for sharing the poem. I invite U to read one such a 'Mourn'

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 November 2017

Memories! ! With the muse of life. Thanks for sharing.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 November 2017

But to accept the reality, That I fear losing you, I am scared of departing, Accepting memories and the taunting. Beautiful stanza in the amazing poem dear poet. Keep it up. Thanks for sharing it. 10++++ Subhas

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