Friday, February 8, 2008

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I m tired with the endless torments,
When will the time come, she will not heave me to disdain,
I gave her time to identify with my actions,
But time went by and nothing resulted.
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Richa Dhodi
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Kesav Easwaran 05 May 2008

feelings won't be understood if kept unspoken...now that you have forgiven and spoken out openly...every thing old will be held back...no doubt. this poem is very pure in it's sincerity... good write, richa...

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Abha Sharma 27 April 2008

If God created us, Why he left the art to humans to articulate oneself? Why not the feelings are understood unspoken? a thoughtful gesture...yes we worry about being so different but then this is the world's way.......well composed thought

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