Sunday, May 26, 2013

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Killing-killing-killing everywhere there is killing
Flood of blood, tears and cries without healing
Gun and the powder are the fruit of festive time
For cruelty they act, for religion they lay mine!
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Akhtar Jawad 20 October 2014

Still time is there for a ugly ending of cry Still time is there for lovely beginning of shy. A great write, God made laws to avoid blood sheds not for promotion of blood sheds.

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Christina Byrd 27 May 2013

Very powerful and so true. Amazing job

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 May 2013

Yes! When will the world learn peace? Great piece of work. Thanks for sharing it with us. E.K.L.

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David Wood 27 May 2013

We have to live in peace and harmony with everybody we meet. A lovely poem Aftab

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David Wood 27 May 2013

We have to live in peace and harmony with all those we come in contact with. A lovely poem aftab

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Yor Nella 27 May 2013

Aftab. You have obviously had an experience of war that I hope I will never experience. Like you I wish for peace to reign and replace the wars we see raging. Peace, perfect peace! In this dark world of sin? The blood of Jesus whispers peace within.

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Gajanan Mishra 26 May 2013

Sun of heaven is dying in rolling motion, Are we not suns of heaven and dying every moment without knowing eternal truth that is there within us ! my dear poet, Very fine poem. thanks.10

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