End Of Time Comments

The beauty is in each stanza that your pen has a breathed life in to is reflected in your choice of words. There is so much love and lightness of being in this poem. 'Together we stay tonight As close as i can reach you Feel the touch of your light As far as your touch invading me Send warm deeper, core of my body As deeper as you now illuminating me Straight to my soul, release your spirit in me' Such magic woven here...straight to my favorites

a good poem about until the end of time. enjoyed

A very touching poem, with an amazing spiritual side, extremly quotable. Thank you for sharing

Loved the line -life is not to waste.Really, we alone can solve our problem.

Each one is unique and each one can brighten up his life if he so chooses. Like a candle, we are to shed light around us! Lofty thoughts and a great poem!

beautifully written as always a excellent poem by you.

My dear friend! As I was reading your poem a bird came to sing and I felt how a soul can connect to another and how spirit may travel and spread its love. In my soul I saw you as the bird outside my window singing love songs. A human ear is always alert to beauty such is my soul to your words. Heartfelt thanks!

I was made to bright not created to be wasted' ............. Till the end of time, The end of my breathe, I wont give up on anything As my life not a waste As you said A poem of value and great depth, beautiful and soothing. Through keen observation, powerful lessons herein, are taught by a simple and familiar object- the candle. Full of life lesson: Learn to sacrifice till nothing's left... Tt's okay to cry, it releases our fellings... Believing sweet lies made one's strength to fade... Good teaching, Soul. And thank you for this wonderful poem.

Just reading this again...so soothing and beautiful.

wonderful

Powerful poem clever to use the candle with so much original ways to bring it into your soul, its liken to candle in the wind and the down fall of the queen of diamonds...only the strength of the poem I mean...+++10 regards

your poems are so insperational to me you are one of the best writers and i am now a fan of this poem i have rated it a deffinate 10 if 100 was on the scale this would be on it ;)

There's much written about the candle n you, and the charisma you both have created in this poem of yours, , , no words left for me to say, except, simply excellent! ! !

How smartly you play with the words...The fluctuation of emotions are flooding in this poem...I liked it alot

Very beautiful poem...brilliant indeed.

A wonderful poem, you presented and a brilliant write.

wow another great thought...you showed again what is in your heart and in your bright mind...

very beautiful and huge meaning...could drown in the depth of your words...heart warming and outstanding. You are a true poet.

So very beautiful. Your soul is pure, and certainly written, my friend. Keep on speaking til your heart stops.

your wording is phenomenal! This poem is one of the best I have read in awhile, truly inspiring! Great write!