Tuesday, May 3, 2011

End Of The Trail Comments

Rating: 5.0

Every step full of pain, a step farther away from my home.
All I knew as a child, now memories and flames.
The fear of darkness weighs on my back.
I'm burdened with worry but I can't stop to cry.
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John DeBona
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 03 May 2011

Great poem with a lot of wisdom. Wonderfully written. Great imagery. Fine poetics. A big...10 Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2

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Raven Mcgovern 03 May 2011

This almost mad me cry..okay I'll admit I did a little bit..

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