End Of The Old Road Comments

almost platonic in appeal.... strong underpinnings of spirituality, respectfully to some commentators i beg to differ....its not just a celebration of the soma that the poet has pointed to...there is an ardent deeper yin yang thing flowing in it....if one gets the drift! but poetry is like that...only one with the key to the enigma is the creators mind.... loved it ***

''A new me without tears, A new me without fears! [...] That day I will be blessed By the Mighty One above Who will show me the path That faithfully I must follow! The path that will lead me to you, The only one on this Earth That will give me a real love For the rest of my life''-searching the perfection-I enjoyed reading this wonderful poem of yours.

That is the spirit, when you are ready to let go the one which is not happy anymore. Just enjoy life, be happy when you have reason to be happy and then be happy within your own soul also, until the next love arrives. In this moment this is the best to do, because there is no such a thing to be happy forever. Eventually it gets boring and same every day, arguments, and long time ago couples stayed together for life, because neither was strong enough to make it on their own even if they were not happy anymore. In the meantime the weaker get sick, even died. I know, I am living between seniors and I can see it. That is why I found happiness within myself, and I never have boring moments or argument for every little thing anymore. I love myself, I love my life.

A thought provoking poem the intensity and sincerity shines from the page, beautiful and heart wrenching the pain we must go through for love.

Roads never ends-between life it always reminisces.Tears roll down as memories of joys and sorrows binded together.This is so the way ur phenomenal write here.Well done Sir and thanks for bringing us morons such a lovely piece..

That's awesome! Really amazing, and so emotional, I take my hat of and stand up for this amazing poem, Keep up the good work, Sir :) May Allah bless you :)

Experience and interpretation thereof by one like you might be quite a personal one. But we humans ought to find solace in living with our own ones and a mere flight to the heaven of promised as if the road has been laid to end alone cannot be the mission of your life. The ultimate test is now on humanity with a vision altruistic.

absolutely breathtaking....the thoughts you have put in the poem is remarkable and heart felt...such a phenomenal write sir...i love it thanks for sharing love, payal

Pure heart, is the only heart that can regenerate after many times torn apart, with divine love from above nothing will empty yours but fulfilling meaning..beautiful poem..You never disappointed...always amazing_Unwritten Soul

this is beautiful written