Friday, November 23, 2012

End Of The Day Rambling. Comments

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Mind. Words swirling begging to be spoken.
Thoughts. Jumbled on the paper asking to be taken notice

of..to be communicated, to be understood, to be felt.
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The Silence Heard
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Alla Simone 08 December 2012

Some highlights fo me are: To be taken seriously, but not personally.(so true) Tongue. The grave yard of the thoughts never uttered. Mouth. The wall that keeps it all in. Paper. The last push. Vivid imagery really help to get your point across in this. Nice work, keep it up.

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