End Of My Day Comments

Lovely poem of absolute wisdom and maturity. A time comes when we have to let go. Some time of the people dearest to us....Once we have given to life with open heart and receieved it with all the love there should be no regrets either.......

To let go! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

(Let Go, Let Go My spirit is free I am moving on...) Exactly how I felt after moving on with my life. Very touching, we'll carry the memories but must move on.

Very beautiful poem dear poetess......... thanks///

Very touching poem. Thanks for sharing.

This is beautiful but very sad.

Wonderful poem, Life is often a journey were we don't known the destination until after we've reached it.

A touching and therapeutic treasure that is.loaded woth love and moving memories.

Full of gravity inside your poem and the heart will let go from the arms of love Great writing

Wonderful and moving and helpful to me. Lyn, you praised my work, so I looked for yours, and this was the first I selected. Serendipity that this one was apropos to my grieving process. Thank you so much for sharing.

Your poems are really great. I like your style and the emotion that your poems express.

Wow one of yor best in rhymin and poetic content. Kudos poetess! Soo Nice to read u again.

Memories are what can keep us going, a great poem.

Now when the time comes for us to go, we can leave the world with no regrets, for we have endured the pain and enjoyed the sweetness! I've seen so much sun shine And I've truly enjoyed the rain......... Love these lines! |

Dear Lyn - thank you for your lovely poem with so much reality and courage. I'll try to take lessens from those words. ts time to let go, there is no other way My life has now ended, Its the end of my day So cherish the moments the memories will last You have to move on... Can't live in the past ..... no other way left.

You have to move on... Can't live in the past Beautiful message delivered in the poem. Thank you.

Beautiful poem Lyn. As always your poem is filled with positivity. I feel its just written for me... Very true said, until and unless we never let go our past, we cannot take even a single step towards present. We have to get out of past to move forward by convincing self. Positive flow of words in each lines. Loved the way you presented it.

So let go, let go I have no pain I've seen so much sun shine And I've truly enjoyed the rain such loveliness in this awe-inspiring refrain!

You capture the beauty of living and the release of our souls as we enter a new beginning at the end of our day! Beautiful, inspired write Lyn!

It's a lovely poem Lyn, which gives a lovely feeling. Yes very true that at the end of the life the mind should have a feeling of Let Go, Let Go My spirit is free