Friday, May 26, 2017

End Of Misery Comments

Rating: 5.0

I gazed, through the window
Seeing the East coast meadow
Out of the horizon came forth
A yellow heavy light
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Timothy Ogunsakin
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Kim Barney 16 June 2017

Thanks for the poet's notes. Without them, this poem would have been much harder to understand. My favorite two lines are: Though, it's hard seeing the ending When you're just beginning Thanks for inviting me to read this. Now I invite you to read my latest: 'Bring another Blanket'.

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C. P. Sharma 29 May 2017

An awesome poem with rhythmic beats. The last couplet sums up the theme beautifully.

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C. P. Sharma 29 May 2017

An awesome poem with rhythmic beats with well woven reality of life.

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