Sunday, April 13, 2014

End Of Love Comments

Rating: 4.5

When the night falls as a veil
Upon street, field and deserted dale
When shooting star burns in mid air
And owls feel agitated in the glare
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 19 April 2014

Last two lines looked out of place in a beautiful poem that reflects love in nature.

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Khairul Ahsan 13 April 2014

Thanks for sharing this sweet, romantic poem with wonderful rhyming. The title and the last two lines are complementary to each other and add poignancy to an otherwise sweet poem. Well done, my friend!

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