End Of Existence Comments

Lovely, yet profound.

Social compulsions made the death of a child. Beautiful expression of feelings.

Time moved on. Thanks for sharing.

A nice poem....hurtful indeed...

The blood flowing on the floor Announced the annihilation of existence, As the budding seed and the lass Were not there to smile anymore! .........So deeply envisioned. A beautiful poem having entensive write. Thanks for sharing.......10

A very thoughtful poem indeed.

Very unfortunate that such incidents happen so frequently in our country especially with female foetus. A brilliant portrayal of a mother's helplessness in the face of ' sharp social claws.'

A breathing bud of life as the budding seed, excellent expression in this poem. Nice job on sharing.

Annihilation of existence is the theme and fact which is to be condemned by all. The law doesn't permit it. A beautiful poem and deep feeling it made.

interesting write by imagery and metaphors

beautiful write by imagery and metaphors

a great write...highly thoughtful...

existence of life is forever... but poem is really amazing.... ;)

a great topic especially for our Indian society where female are neither safe in the womb nor outside the womb. a great write.

Thankyou very much for sharing this poem, This poem totally justify the essence of the topic. Words are used in such a way that a reader feel in a deep way, how devastating and inhuman this social menace is.

Your poem is beautiful, esp. the last line, and I can only thank you for your thoughtful expression in this regard.

The cruelty on female foeticide was thoroughly expressed in those poignant lines.... a good massage.

congrase on being a member of the day.... too piogant poem with strong projection.. liked it

a killing poem based on a bitter reality...written with poetic mastery...i'm thankful for this your sharing with me...best of luck! ! !

Great write. Highly thoughtful