Tuesday, August 18, 2009

End Of Days Comments

Rating: 5.0

When loneliness fills this empty heart,
Just feelings of nothingness being apart,
When I wake each morning and you're no longer there,
But your smell remains and carries me near,
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ben burgess
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Catrina Heart 21 August 2009

poignant composition here...well expressed feelings! ! ! Thanks.........10

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Lynda Robson 20 August 2009

Your sadness seeps through the page, emotive write Ben 10 Lynda xx

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Jason Garraway 18 August 2009

Nice poem, what inspired you to write this?

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Steven S 18 August 2009

Oh, this is so familiar to me... thanks for writing it.

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