Friday, August 26, 2016

End Of Day Comments

Rating: 4.7

horizontal rays of light
illuminate the stolid trees
swaying in a gentle breeze
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Barry Middleton
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Nosheen Irfan 27 August 2016

The last stanza is like icing on the cake. Written with deep feelings. An acceptance of fate, of darkness graciously.10

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Barry Middleton 27 August 2016

Thank you Nosheen. I can think of nothing else to do with fate but accept it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 August 2016

Setting sun definitely says about fate and we see darkness comes inside. Life process comes towards end and we face death. Horizontal rays of light we expect to get next in arrival of birth. Accepting final hour is wise motive because there is hidden truth of new life. Amazing this poem is and philosophical definitely...10

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Barry Middleton 27 August 2016

Thank you. The comment and rating are appreciated.

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