Thursday, October 6, 2011

End Of Day Comments

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Behind the weeping willow,
the sun sets.
I follow the twilight's
hues of red.
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Jacqui Broad
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Adriana Lopez 23 January 2012

That. Was Poems why not.

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Harindhar Reddy 04 November 2011

'All the ways reads to Rome is an old saying' Poet all poems of yours leads one eternal love - heart-broken, heartrending. However, I like the way the poem was started with diction in the world of fiction where life is an action is my feeling........ 'Behind the weeping willow, the sun sets. I follow the twilight's hues of red.' However, with you poem I feel still people are living by heart, by sensitivity, A Great feeling is this. A big treat to you if only god trips the distance of 1000s of miles. Kudos!

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Jinal Oswal 14 October 2011

You have an excellent observation... you have portrayed the sunset so well.. How much ever good the day be.. At the end of the day when we are lying on the bed..The purpose of our being stands in front of us....

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Bradley Lester 07 October 2011

One just needs to take 1 day at a time cos tomorrow you maye not wake up = so let the future take care of itself

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Vipins Puthooran 06 October 2011

Excellent poem... You drew the images of a sunset to colour your emotions... Well written... Plz read my poem /a fall

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David Ration Lekoba 06 October 2011

Said from the heart! wow...you wow me...

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