Tuesday, November 2, 2021

End Of A Long Journey. Comments

Rating: 5.0

The stillness of the night
Makes enough noise altogether
Slicing me in a two-piece
One to live the reality
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M. Asim Nehal
COMMENTS
Dr Dillip K Swain 21 November 2021

A fabulous poem dear Dr Nehal. Loved reading it. Top score!

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Rebecca Navarre 03 November 2021

Such a heart touching poem! .. Written with such depth and beauty! .. May you find beauty and peace! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 03 November 2021

an enduring question of peace Bravo!

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Deluke Muwanigwa 02 November 2021

Lovely piece full of beautiful loneliness

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Darren Jkoeryo 02 November 2021

What a wonderful poem, Slicing me in a two-piece One to live the reality Another to live in dreams.

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Tihama Hykam 02 November 2021

When the waves touch the shore It is the end of a long journey, Leaving silence behind. Brilliant.

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Michael Jack 02 November 2021

Apt ending to a fabulous dream to reality journey. Full Stars

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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