Monday, April 4, 2016

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Trillions of years from now
The scattered remnants of our Universe
Float in endless darkness,
All stars extinguished.
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Paul Butters
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Spock The Vegan 04 April 2016

It is a slight possibility that very few scientists believe. Nice poem anyway. See my poem Big Bang Creation.

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Paul Butters 04 April 2016

Few scientists believe! That's a bonus.

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Paul Butters 06 April 2016

PS I read today that the universe will become ALL black holes, leading to one great black hole. It MIGHT then contract further to produce another Big Bang.....and this could be cyclical!

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Eugene Levich 04 April 2016

Let us accept the fact, finely reported by Mr. Butters, that all the poems we write, as well as all our comments, will someday be remembered by no one.

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Paul Butters 04 April 2016

I'm ever the optimistic motivator, Eugene. ;)

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Rajnish Manga 04 April 2016

Amazing narrative presenting a picture of universe in the contraction mode. Loved reading it. The Universe contracts again Back to that point From which it all Began.

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Paul Butters 04 April 2016

Thanks Rajnish. My head goes to some places at times. Or is that time at places? ? ?

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