Sunday, May 26, 2019

End O Desire Comments

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Desire Must End

You O Poet
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me poet yeps poet
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Muzahidul Reza 27 May 2019

Why end? O, desire You will be forever I'll avail you ever and ever O, desire

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i was just wondering when you would be coming

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Mahtab Bangalee 27 May 2019

the culmination Gods send..........! maybe not, not! maybe

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no culmination its loves summation mb of bdi was just wondering when you would be coming

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Rajnish Manga 26 May 2019

Desire Must End...Desire has no end it lives on... till the Rivera does end A philosophical poem probing the common minimum denominator in our lives along with the relative developments till its final culmination in the form of the 'End O Desire'. Quite impressive. Thanks, Dear Poet. till the Rivera does end

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Akhtar Jawad 26 May 2019

Devices to fulfill the desires may become stale but desires are never stale.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 26 May 2019

N LIFE WE JUST ARE BROUGHT THEN DESIRES ARE BORN AT GOD SPEED TILL THE SUN ROLLS THEN COMES TWILIGHT

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 26 May 2019

N LIFE WE JUST ARE BROUGHT THEN DESIRES ARE BORN AT GOD SPEED TILL THE SUN ROLLS THEN COMES TWILIGHT

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