~ End Not My Inner Swash Slush ~ Comments

a poem tuned entirely out from nexuses from inner rattling has to differ sincerely to share swelling - a happy exiled Publius Ovid Lee

Poetic Candy and Romantic Buxom Oozing romance with befitting imageries Such a romantic poem expresses Not to end 'Inner Swash Slush' Who'll do I'd say one is emotionally blunt May be blunt become sharp by such approach of romantic approach joyous poem indeed good write... 10+

It poetry of 6 stanzas....5 only poet questioned in various ways to get noticed of beloved '...Mesmeric mudra/Is it fugacious virtual or /Redundant real unveil Not why O’ You? ...' it is best expression of romantic question Finally poet nicely concluded '...Park in my tote trove/ As lucullan opulent riches. this word Lucullan is very aptly placed and added diamonded glitter gloss Great experience for me Thanks for sharing

O’ Nimble spree your Euphonic balletic fingers’ Wreathing garland 'Bedecking billowing Of seductress lap Park in my tote trove As lucullan opulent riches.' ~ It just for me a Poetic Genius Oozing Oohing me in allness me Embracing me in rapture Its just Romantic Painting with excellent expression by tool of vocab..biblio candy visual honeying Hats off to Poet for your imagination Regards

I should say fire-works of Romantic Imageres...sure who'll '...End Not My Inner Swash Slush.'? Especially when call with passionate lines ~ O’ Nimble spree your Euphonic balletic fingers’ Wreathing garland Bedecking billowing Of seductress lap Park in my tote trove As lucullan opulent riches. Such romantic poems you've written but to me this is one of the matchlessness 10+++ Of seductress lap Park in my tote trove As lucullan opulent riches.

Good write Niv and I could almost feel your seductive mood as I mingled through the poem. Keep going girl. Good Job.

Twilight twinkling stars Honeying candying me Time to be in unison dialogue Can’t listen O’ You? Delightful lines, beautiful poem which the words are also a seduction to the reader. Great flow and so well penned. Loved reading it. Thank You so much.

very good poem.good word used in poem

i agree with Anita (:

Facing infinite sky Wreathing garland On your seductress lap the beauty of festivals of celebration, love felt energy, dedicated to beauty joy happiness, seduces all souls in celebration of life, seduces all to bond in community of caring

embracing the infinite within.. lovely poem. Thanks for sharing!

i too do not fully understand but you sound very happy

This style of writing reminds me of Dada. It differs from the predominant here, which definitely makes me happy. Congratulations!

That is a difficult proposition not to end slush slash. After all others ae human beings too, not slush machines, while God I think would refrain from doing so. but you can imagine as you wish.10

Such a masterpiece, I loved your word choice, your tone, the refrains, simply everything, you are a great poet

I did enjoyed reading this poem.I think it is brilliant creation........

Your poetry, I do not completely understand, probably a language problem. However I read the poem and came to a conclusion that someone is about to be seduced. A good read, I'm trying to understand. Thanks for the invite. Lynn