End Love Comments

A poignant poem of love. Not all we want to be with can reciprocate the feelings we have for them. Very touching.

This poem is chosen twice, last year and today. WOW! Twice CONGRATS!

Congratulations being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day.5 Stars fir this amazing poem.

I told you to read the Songs of Offerings You went to fetch the Lord Byron I told you to listen the flute of Lord Krishna But you painted the sufferings of Heer No sun rises for our togetherness No moon enlightens for our togetherness No flower blooms for our togetherness We are still alone on our love path We are still half.........

Meanwhile, Juliet fell asleep while waiting. Romeo of this era no to care about it. This is how loves end......oh! sometimes some desired loves are ended over on half ways; half there is where waiting falls in asleep (subconscious mind): beautifully presented the scenery of half love by delineating the ROMEO and JULIET figures; congrats for being selected as POD

I liked this poem, but was saddened by the rejection and failure to return. Good writing. Thanks for sharing this experience with us.

Very interesting poem. In today’s world easier to give a poetry book than a hour of true companionship. Congratulation on a wonderful member poem.

Congrats! A well deserved selection as members' poem.

I do not know if the situation here is developed to a clear satisfaction. I find the writing has a few lines that are a hinder to the flow or smoothness of the story the poem tries to tell; saying this, it is my take only and many may not agree.

A well crafted poem of the day. Truly impressive. Congrats on your featured piece...5 stars*****

This is rubbish. Get off the site you the spectre of night.

'But nonchalant Romeo did not come back' - it goes well with the caption of the poem. Congratulations on your poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'!

Thanks for your compliment who like this poem. I'm very grateful. Keep in touch with me

Ended all paths But no end was there Soul of love eternal Memory never dies Love lives long soul to soul

Write comment. Such a nice poem, Suraiya Islam. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks