Friday, November 15, 2013

End Is Beginning Comments

Rating: 3.5

End is beginning
its kind of circle
gyrating in mindless motion
lost the symphony....
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Nivedita Patnaik
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Jazib Kamalvi 28 January 2018

Very impressive write, Nivedita. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Jetty J Newnham 02 December 2013

Lovely, also sad, also positive

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Suman Kumar Das 24 November 2013

short but superb! liked it......................................

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Nivedita Patnaik 16 November 2013

Thank you Jeff...u always encourage...

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Jetty J Newnham 16 November 2013

I enjoyed this, I remembered Buddhist lessons, beautiful thank you!

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