End Is Begining Comments
I cannot feel anymore
My body is numb
no feeling or emotion
I cannot overcome
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An extreamly sad poem, very powerful with overwhelming despair, depression is so hard to battle but sometimes when we think nothing will ever get better...it does and may that be the case with you...I do find that poetry helps me with mine
Bill, I always like how you acknowledge and validate the emotions in a poem then quickly remind us that hope is just around the corner!
You can feel the disappointment, the frustration, the relinquishment of this poem. Absolutely perfect!
I always like when a reader could feel the same emotions that are expressed in the poem. It is the greatest compliment! thank you!
Without a dream can one truly be alive? And what is left? Waking up with an empty heart is more than lonely. A 10.
Sometimes we just need to get a different dream! thank you for reading and commenting my friend! I am grateful!
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8/3/2025 4:50:19 PM # 1.0.0
A well written dance through emotion, very well written
I'm dancing away! thank you Matthew!