End Is Begining Poem by Aqua Flower
End Is Begining
I cannot feel anymore
My body is numb
no feeling or emotion
I cannot overcome
I cannot feel anymore
the hurt is so bad
I was better feeling happy with the sad
now I just feel mad
And my anger makes it worse
My days filled with emptiness
and all I can do is curse
at all the bitter unhappiness
I cannot feel anymore
that dream I can no longer see
Is there any more hope for me?
I cannot feel anymore
I live in a body now that is a robot
clutched in the devils claw
My beating heart will stop
I cannot feel anymore
the end will come
when there is nothing to live for
my life will be done
Copyright @ Aqua Flower
An extreamly sad poem, very powerful with overwhelming despair, depression is so hard to battle but sometimes when we think nothing will ever get better...it does and may that be the case with you...I do find that poetry helps me with mine
Bill, I always like how you acknowledge and validate the emotions in a poem then quickly remind us that hope is just around the corner!
You can feel the disappointment, the frustration, the relinquishment of this poem. Absolutely perfect!
I always like when a reader could feel the same emotions that are expressed in the poem. It is the greatest compliment! thank you!
Without a dream can one truly be alive? And what is left? Waking up with an empty heart is more than lonely. A 10.
Sometimes we just need to get a different dream! thank you for reading and commenting my friend! I am grateful!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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8/3/2025 1:29:40 AM # 1.0.0
A well written dance through emotion, very well written
I'm dancing away! thank you Matthew!