Wednesday, May 21, 2008

End Day Comments

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None with th'all
Great fire will reign from the sky
People will go into a panic,
Tears will be dripping,
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Ben Luwhiski
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Tohru Unger 29 July 2008

Nice. It's very easy to picture a scene like that. The words flowed together nicely too. You have great talent

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~A Little Blue Bird~ 05 July 2008

That was hardcore. But wonderfully put together in words! Very expressive in your thoughts too. ~The Little Blue Bird~

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Sarah Abu Zeid 04 June 2008

a really good poem i felt the end day and the poem made in me feelings i can't express with words nice work

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