Silent bell and silent sun
Space enough between us
Now as then
Attached to spiny beliefs sharper at each start
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More abstraction. I read this as a row of some sort between yourself and your son. Whatever, its marvelously evocotive of all sort of notions.
Excellent work Tailor, once again you bring the reader into the poem, this is marvelous, excellent read, fabulous imagry. Thankyou Tailor--Melvina--
Feelings that course deep within, the imagery outstanding in the Tailor Bell fashion!
TAILOR...NICE STORYLINE...STELLAR IMAGEWORK...I ENJOY YOUR UNIQUE STYLE OF EXPRESSION...KEEP THAT PEN PUMPIN, TAILOR! '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR
A poem full of feeling, thankyou for sharing this Love duncan X
A ride through the synapses with scarcely a second to think how you can make that harmful break.
Tailor, you've knitted almost every duality I can think of into this amazing mosaic: pain/pleasure; tenderness/bristling hard edged attitudes and positions; time passing/stillness; space/intimacy; love/loss/hope/regret (cheating I know): even agony and ecstasy in degrees, all in an atmosphere that transcends them all; As if the bitter can/should/might become sweet, and vice versa. Basically, I can see just about any damned thing I want in here! But you've kept it all so tight, so precise, fluent and yet so comprehensive - enough of all of these and more to match this blending of numerous fundamental themes. If you want your head screwed every which way read a Tailor Bell poem! ! You're profundity personified. jim