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Rating: 4.9

Silent bell and silent sun
Space enough between us
Now as then
Attached to spiny beliefs sharper at each start
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Tailor Bell
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Not a member No 4 03 January 2007

Tailor, you've knitted almost every duality I can think of into this amazing mosaic: pain/pleasure; tenderness/bristling hard edged attitudes and positions; time passing/stillness; space/intimacy; love/loss/hope/regret (cheating I know): even agony and ecstasy in degrees, all in an atmosphere that transcends them all; As if the bitter can/should/might become sweet, and vice versa. Basically, I can see just about any damned thing I want in here! But you've kept it all so tight, so precise, fluent and yet so comprehensive - enough of all of these and more to match this blending of numerous fundamental themes. If you want your head screwed every which way read a Tailor Bell poem! ! You're profundity personified. jim

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David Dennis 02 December 2006

More abstraction. I read this as a row of some sort between yourself and your son. Whatever, its marvelously evocotive of all sort of notions.

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Melvina Germain 21 November 2006

Excellent work Tailor, once again you bring the reader into the poem, this is marvelous, excellent read, fabulous imagry. Thankyou Tailor--Melvina--

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Patricia Gale 09 September 2006

Feelings that course deep within, the imagery outstanding in the Tailor Bell fashion!

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 11 August 2006

TAILOR...NICE STORYLINE...STELLAR IMAGEWORK...I ENJOY YOUR UNIQUE STYLE OF EXPRESSION...KEEP THAT PEN PUMPIN, TAILOR! '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Duncan Wyllie 06 August 2006

A poem full of feeling, thankyou for sharing this Love duncan X

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Linda Hepner 31 July 2006

A ride through the synapses with scarcely a second to think how you can make that harmful break.

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