Saturday, November 9, 2013

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After the 'mortal taste of that forbidden tree'
Man has been preoccupied with his ending
And when the promised apocalypse might be?
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Mohsen Musavi
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 28 November 2013

A great grand hardhitting poem on man's reachin d end of d world. Kudos. I hope u read my latest too.

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Sina Farajzadeh 10 November 2013

Hi. I just read your poem and amused by it. I like the way you adapted your poem with the quotations of Nietzsche and Milton. I too am waitning for the end but it's more like waiting for Godot.... hehehe. Good luck

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Douglas Scotney 09 November 2013

what does it look like, what you call a 'coach' in Iran, Mohsin? for us in Australia it's a trainer or a fancy bus.

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