Encumbered Poem by Aqua Flower

Encumbered

Rating: 5.0


locked away inside
with no way out
I cry
dormant I will stay
shell says go away
encumbered by the enemy
with voices of profanity
walls all around
I'll never be found

Copyright @ Aqua Flower

Thursday, February 7, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: defeat,emotions,loss,problems
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Matthew Holloway 06 March 2019

surrounded, trapped and kept hidden away, i hope you break free great poem

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Carl Roussell 07 February 2019

Being surrounded by bitter voices can be a stronger cell than any bricks and mortar cell. I hope you find a way to tunnel your way out!

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Kostas Lagos 07 February 2019

A verse of disappointment! It has a bitter - sweet taste... love it

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Bill Cantrell 07 February 2019

So many times victory comes when voices of profanity are boasting, and that victory is oh so sweet! A sad but a poem of release,

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