Encouragement Comments

So why not use our words to lift someone up today! .....oh, yes we must use our words to lift someone up today! A brilliant poem is well executed.

Good advice at the end. Hope all at ph take heed, for there are many little toddlers here needing words of encouragement. (10)

You captured fantastic moments of love between the older sister and her younger brother. If we keep our eyes open, there are so many stories, real stories unfolding every day: positive stories with wonderful messages. The poet picks up the stories and shares them with the world. Poetry at it highest purpose. I loved reading this one very much and the last paragraph is very inspiring. Thanks so much, Valsa

Encouragement is a great help, It can put faith, hope, and strength of life, into any one, at any time in one's life. A lovely piece of work, thanks for sharing, Valsa11111

Awwww... I really love watching kids play and play with them.. Nowadays, they are so more intellegent and brave.. I really loved how you took a simple incident and turned it into a poetic experience that could be shared with one and all.. We should, indeed, be like the little girl and encourage everyone to take a 'leap of faith'.. It is beautiful poem Valsa ma'am.. Little brats teach us a lot :)

Such a heart warming poem. An every day moment gets immortalized in beautiful poetry. There's a lesson to be learnt from every small happening in life. This slide will be lost upon most mortals but a poet turns the mundane into significant. Full marks to you.

A vogorous pen to transform an everyday's scene into a a poetical event.

I totally agree with you here.A little bit of encouragement can definitely do wonders.Nice way of passing the message.Thanks for shsring

The trump card was the last stanza. An excellent piece of work and what I say is of course not in the way of any encouragement!

Beautiful poem on encouragement from a simple of observation of a common event. We can learn from children too.

Wow...what a powerful message..a slightest encouragemnet from someone is all we need to push ourselves towards the goal...and you have brilliantly explained this in the form of siblings playing in the slide. Excellent Mam! You truly would have been amongst the favourite professor of your students.

How like the little boy, we too rely on others For their encouragement to do the hard things in life People need lift, with generous souls buoying them up So why not use our words to lift someone up today! A nice message.

Seeing his sister's adventurous ride. Nice piece of work.

A wonderful, important message Valsa. To give encouragement with a kind word does not cost much yet the dividends for the soul are tenfold......10

Nice imagery and an important bit of wisdom

Beautiful just beautiful message, A kind word, a warm hug, a pat and a smile is what this world need... Few encouraging words will lift someones dampen spirits. So let's start spreading love and warmth all around. You made my day by sharing this beautiful poem.10+++++