When I look back
at the city of love
we never did part
the brilliance of the skies
...
Read full text
a wonderful poem filled by beautiful painful passion...10++++
I see you. Yes slow the love Lifes galore Encore Once more...........................tells us about the sequential and torrential titillating of love.
wonderful flow of words...good imagery...had a drink of love..excellent
Intense feeling....flood of passion...an incredible outcome! ! ! !
Slow the love (Continues) Final Episode Undone The beloved asked who told you this Art thou God to decide the fate Calling the episodes as the final Did not the love tell you of the thought So sacred but the blasphemy of love As the story goes when the legendry lover Adam Khan* dies with story teller in tears From the audience a man with a sword Bring him back or you pay with your life The horse with the wings that thou flyeth In the visions ah the beloved appeared In dreams in the nature in the loneliness Of nights and the afternoons thou spent The episode who knows what final or primal From the beloved thou wanted separation In the religion of love none worshiped None worshipper as no rituals in play No ablution no baths in the rivers Nothing is sacred and nothing is dear Yet thou think to close the episode Let the beloved be the guide don’t meddle Decide not the fate that thou knowest not Nothing in here and let the mystery Of love unfold for the eyes and the ears On the soil and down the horse on doorstep To the city of love with the pride Leave the judgment to the universal soul He shall not judge the lovers as judgment for what Just a breath away is the annihilation in waiting Hold on the hands of beloved for a dance tonight *Adam Khan-Durkhanai, epic story of love.
well anjali... u are the best thing to happen to my life this new year....once again a fabulous write.....great job lady
enchanting words...brought me to the magical place of fantasy.... amazing imagery floating like magical(fantastic) pictures... the princess of poetry strikes again with this breathtaking piece.... 10++ +++anju
on a dark alley wall lovers well never fall as their shadow kiss eternally for us all on this wall of bliss two shadow dance. for us all... your writing makes me hold my breath in enjoyment! ! ...10+++++++++++++++++
An extract from Richard Jarboe ======================================== ** ORIGINAL MESSAGE ******************** ======================================== From: Richard Jarboe To: Anjali Sinha Date-Time: 2/3/2009 8: 19: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: encore --- Great title. Beautiful idea. richard
fantastic write..how marvelous love verses I perused..repeated once more..and more I repeat and encore I said...10
a superb write like always anju....whenever i read your poems it makes me feel the pure love and intense yearn, i don't know i might be wrong but you surely is one of my best poet here on PH, although my writting style is completely different from yours, i mostly write on wrath or pain and you write on love and whenevr i feel so intense i come on your paqge to read and encourage myself...im thankful and greatful that you are my friend May God Bless You Always and many 100's for this and all of your marvellous write rgds asif
Ahhhhhhhh....its good to exchange views and love through poetry but overdoing it would caused boredom and stereotype.Anyway nice love poem dear.
In the city of Love, Love is here and Love is there, Love is all around; In your musical mirth of love, I find the grief profound. Friends say Encore, You sing once more, Love never comes to an end, In ovation to your poetry I applaud and stand. CP
a beauty in pain.....written beautifully