Monday, May 12, 2008

Encore (C) 5-12-08 Comments

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I love the words encore bravo and the applause
The sound of clapping below me knowing I am without flaws
snapping slapping smacking because of my performance
I'm looked up for my prestige my charm and my conformance
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Zahir Kijani
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Rory Hudson 17 April 2009

Nice bold sort of style... suits the subject matter. The rhythm of it flows properly and is well handled.

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, , , , , , 28 March 2009

hey i really liked your poetic structure and rhythm the first line is impressive, , , good stuff

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Zahir Kijani

Zahir Kijani

Buffalo, New york
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