Tuesday, October 7, 2008

***! ! ! Encore Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sigh from mirage of your lips
Mist over panes of my eyes
I fumble and trip over a dream
I’m falling into your absence
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Rehan Hyder
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Viola Grey 19 October 2008

well...I can clearly see why this is loved by many....something this lovely deserves the praise....nice write

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Tai Chi Italy 14 October 2008

These few words put together with such skill, and reflecting romance in the definity of always needing more....is a talent that you shine in Rehan! love is a never ending trace across our lives, we just have to recognise it as it flies....Loved every word, from the sigh to the rapturous Encore....Waving at you, Tai

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Francesca Martin 11 October 2008

Like tripping over a cloud... absence indeed pulls us in closer to what we're missing. Short and yet anything more said would be too much. great job!

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 09 October 2008

very enthralling...and we all fall over with you i believe...its so wistful that despite its brevity it pulls you in for a long time

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Indira Babbellapati 08 October 2008

isn't this an unending process, rehan...for all sensitive heart and minds...?

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 08 October 2008

Absolutely amazing poem, sir. Very touchy. Thank you.

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