Thursday, April 20, 2006

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It...
(an unfathomable wrong,
an unforgettable song,
a friend’s betrayal,
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Sonny Rainshine
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Joseph Harskamp 26 September 2006

alright, this was slightly creative in its structure, but the ryhme was as smooth as it could have been.

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Alex Nodopaka 28 April 2006

Creative. I'd leave a space between the first & last word.

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Brian Dorn 20 April 2006

Sonny, I like the format of your poem... very creative! Brian

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