Encircled Triage Poem by Naseer Ahmed Nasir

Encircled Triage

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Life is an empty abode
Built on the verge of
An invisible road
Leading to perpetual death
Muted in an eternal mode
Deprived of an omen
Or a node
Red, yellow, green
Encircled in a triadic universal code.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Supriya Prathapan 01 May 2009

So very true. Most of the time we do not where our life is going. We all know that we are going to die one day, yet we always want to heap more and more material possessions.

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Nikki White 01 May 2009

i like it says alot brings me to think of life and how it is today

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Dagmara Anna 28 April 2009

Very much I like your poem. A truth is included in it. Nice you wrote, really. Thank you. Greetings. (10v.) Dagmara Anna

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Elaine Oxamendi Vicet 26 April 2009

So much to ponder on..as it is not only written with a metaphysical overtone but we order our lives like that..what is most important we prioritise and clinically too. So much to ponder on here. E

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Noel Horlanda 25 April 2009

short and marvelous enough. You have strange idea about life. Nearly all negatives, no positive. well that's your way, I can't change it.

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Alex Sarich 25 January 2017

you write the truth, nicely written.

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Sonali Ganguly 16 January 2016

nice lines sir...short but expresses a deep thought.

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Seema Chowdhury 22 July 2015

An engaging write, nicely composed.

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Emma Adamyan 03 July 2009

the shot(poem) hits the target

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 01 May 2009

Yes, the only thing we are sure of is death- when our moment comes...nature goes on doing what it has done from the beginning of time - they are better off than we humans but we interfere with them too....good write this. Thank you Cindy

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