Sunday, September 1, 2019

Enchantress...Trilogy Of Evil Part 3 Comments

Rating: 5.0

Miss Goody Two Shoes.
No, not that one teen paedophile slicing slaughterhouse.
She's out of the country.
She's teamed up with The Lady Killer.
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Shaun Cronick 15 July 2020

Rose Marie I thank you for once again for revisiting and for your most kind and generous comment. Take care and I wish you well.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 June 2020

Revisiting this one of a kind write that only a true and brilliant Poet can weave and deliver. Simply amazing.

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Mahtab Bangalee 03 March 2020

beautiful dramatic monologue; greatly written- Truth is we would never have caught you. You're too good. Too perfect.../// well poem penned

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Shaun Cronick 05 March 2020

Thank you so much sir for your kind and most welcomed comment. Any kind comment from your good self I welcome and cherish. Thank you so much sir. And may God Bless And Keep you and the loved ones around you.

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Bryony Sheldon 12 September 2019

Incredible! Every line draws you in closer- the spite is felt in every word. Brilliant imagery delivered dramatically; this deserves over a 10.

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Shaun Cronick 15 September 2019

Thank you Bryony for your most generous and kind comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it was originally twice as long but that version timed out on me typing and uploading, so this is the edited down version and I think it works and flows better. Thanks again and take care.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 September 2019

Another poetic gem, Shaun. Your Poetry is varied. Your Poet's pen can go to the realm of fantasy, biblical, reality and many more. Onto my Poem List.

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Shaun Cronick 03 September 2019

Thank you Rose Marie for your warm and welcoming, kind and generous comments. This wraps up The Trilogy Of Evil poems: - She Was There, Miss Goody Two Shoes ending on Enchantress. But I didn't burn all bridges, maybe one of the team-up of Miss Goody Two Shoes and the mysterious named The Lady Killer and their exploits abroad. Hinted at the beginning.

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Shaun Cronick 03 September 2019

Thank you so much Rose Marie for your kind comments The good people where I work say varied and eclectic when reading any finished work. And oddly enough I'm working on a ballet poem called The Red Shoes. And I will complete I Fight For My Ladies Colours among others. I'm just enjoying time off from work. I thank you so much good Rose Marie. Take care.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 September 2019

A captivating and gripping story. Simply wonderful. It expresses in brilliant detail how a great cop can nail down a criminal. With superb imagery, a reader can feel he is at close range with the criminal, and his presence in the scene of the investigation. The facts narrated flow naturally.

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Shaun Cronick 18 June 2020

Wow! Thank you Rose Marie for your many warmly welcomed and treasured, generous comments. Take care and I wish you well.

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Uche Nwanze 01 September 2019

Enthralling, exhilarating, I felt like reading over and over again. Beautiful lines, beautifully crafted

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Shaun Cronick 02 September 2019

Thank you Uche for your kind and generous comment. Take care man.

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