Enchantment (Senryu) Comments

It's probably the best idea: so of course I never do it. Well framed words in your senryu.

it hit me on my face!

Beautiful senryu in vividness! Thanks! ! !

good idea.meaningful..grace

I went straight to this Senryu and chuckled. What a sharp and clever wit you have! 10 Karin Anderson

moving few lines indeed...i was enchanted 10 regards shan..

nice one doesnt absence makes the heart grow fonder? -10 anjali

getting yourself absent to make your heart grow fonder.

perfect...physical distance may sustain enchantment...good one makes one think on relationship