Everything has end either on enchanting or on sad,
Expatiation is strenuous on everything manmade.
Except virtuous qualities and God, all are perishable,
Expect we should always good deeds expendable.
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picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ x....I'm enchanted with this write....absolutely love every line beginning with E :) ★ 6 Jun 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xvery, very nice 6 Jun 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply picture of Fay Slimm xA most interesting and cleverly written verse of soundest advice on living spiritually to really succeed. I love the feeling of comfort you create in the closing stanza - an upbuilding read dear poet friend and thank you for posting. 6 Jun 2015 by Fay Slimm | Reply picture of Angel mia LOVE xVery true tfs xoxoxo xoxoxo xoxoxo blessings darling 7 Jun 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply picture of Augustus..... xVery beautifully penned! 8 Jun 2015 by Augustus..... | Reply
Gems of wisdom lie scattered in these lines! Enjoyed reading this poem with all lines starting with the same letter!
Wonderful words with great meaning. Love all that you have expressed.
One of the best poem I have read recent times.Nicely done with strong message to all.Very nice Sir.
A marvelous bit of philosophizing, detracted from a little by the tactic of using the same letter to start each line but valid reasoning throughout
The Thinker of Odisha is once again shining as a sun in this great poem......................10
This alliteration poem has smooth flow and through invisible day we feel existence of day. This is wonderful and nice poem...10