Saturday, June 6, 2015

Enchanting End Comments

Rating: 5.0

Everything has end either on enchanting or on sad,
Expatiation is strenuous on everything manmade.
Except virtuous qualities and God, all are perishable,
Expect we should always good deeds expendable.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Pushpendra Patel 12 February 2019

This alliteration poem has smooth flow and through invisible day we feel existence of day. This is wonderful and nice poem...10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 December 2016

picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ x....I'm enchanted with this write....absolutely love every line beginning with E :) ★ 6 Jun 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xvery, very nice 6 Jun 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply picture of Fay Slimm xA most interesting and cleverly written verse of soundest advice on living spiritually to really succeed. I love the feeling of comfort you create in the closing stanza - an upbuilding read dear poet friend and thank you for posting. 6 Jun 2015 by Fay Slimm | Reply picture of Angel mia LOVE xVery true tfs xoxoxo xoxoxo xoxoxo blessings darling 7 Jun 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply picture of Augustus..... xVery beautifully penned! 8 Jun 2015 by Augustus..... | Reply

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Valsa George 18 June 2015

Gems of wisdom lie scattered in these lines! Enjoyed reading this poem with all lines starting with the same letter!

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Lyn Paul 08 June 2015

Wonderful words with great meaning. Love all that you have expressed.

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 June 2015

One of the best poem I have read recent times.Nicely done with strong message to all.Very nice Sir.

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Kelly Kurt 06 June 2015

A marvelous bit of philosophizing, detracted from a little by the tactic of using the same letter to start each line but valid reasoning throughout

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Akhtar Jawad 06 June 2015

The Thinker of Odisha is once again shining as a sun in this great poem......................10

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 June 2015

Everything has an end in life life. Great work!

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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