Enchanted Comments

A soliloquy cogitating on the child hood memories And reliving it in poetic form Explaining the beauty oft he sand and the sunkissed cheeks Whispering foam, enchanting water if weed and pearl, illuminating sand in the sunshine. This is simply marvelous poem. Thank you dear poetess.

Only the 2nd poem I've read of yours, and both feature the ocean! Having lived at the beach for the past 25 years, I'd say your descriptions are excellent! May your attraction to the ocean, and your writing continue!

This is beautiful poetry. 'Each step casting rings of gold' is a very nice line Thanks for sharing.

Hi Carol, A wonderful poem. Exquisite one: the waves leave behind a whispering foam what an image! ! ! I think I am able to hear the whisper of the foam while reading the poem..... That's about waves foam sea and nature. Now, to just see how nature celebrates childhood: Enchanting deep water of weed and pearl Spellbinds the small child who walks alone The sand illuminates around her feet Each step casting rings of gold The sky in a blaze of folly pink With the snow moon invoking her soul Loved this poem. Thrilled! ! A 100+++