Sunday, September 20, 2015

Emptyness Comments

Rating: 4.3

Here I am on the floor
left for the died
my pride is replaced
with the feeling shame,
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Chinedu Dike 12 October 2015

A good depiction of the deplorable condition of life at very low ebb, well articulated and nicely encapsulated. A lovely piece of poetry bristling with insight. Thanks for sharing Chantelle. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Fabrizio Frosini 21 September 2015

Emptiness.. a feeling experienced by many in their life (and not once only..)

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Kelly Kurt 20 September 2015

that emptiness strikes us all at one time. Head up Peace

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