Empty Worlds..... Comments

Subsubtle and contemplative poem…in compressed colored words… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

A lovely poem with the double message; hope and despair go along together; hand in hand. 19th August,2009 Rehana Nazli

Sorry, don't get it. Your style could be described as beautiful, but obtuse. Kind of a brain teaser, for the initiated.

With less you have cleverly said it all - the hopelessness shines through the angst we all feel today

very good write! ! luv it! !

short and brief, but it portrays hundreths of meanings..grace

Nice, sweet little short poem: D Very nicely written, and I absolutely love it Saadat. Your talent is incredible, keep writting! H&K's Jess (:

superb it is, nice porm Saadat! 10..

Mamta says it all. Only thing i can add is thank you for sharing your talent :)

An excellent short poem.

Sadaat, you have said so much in these four lines. master of brevity... empty world, hopeless not even a silver lining- despair and angst comes out so poignantly. 10++ Mamta

Skilfully composed as always, dear poet friend. Emptiness disappears filled with light of your words.. :) Best wishes. A.

Wow excellent theme of the poem, few words make a deep sense.good job sir.

A beautiful write Saadat, the worlds become empty and meaningless.... so keep these filled with your sensitive but powerful thoughts! 10+++

well i feel empty, stranded and alone all the time...... this is a nice one Sadaat... you know i read your earlier poems about social injustice and you know your childrens day poem...this one shows that you are a versatile writer..well it is only three lines..but language is beautiful..the kinda language that refreshes our sore minds! ! ! 10++ regards shan

Rest a while at the perfect pout..........very sad world without u.beautiful write from poet. well done

empty world is nothing..empty as without you..nicely penned..naizz

nicely penned..well composed..grace

nice................

sweet....................................................