Friday, June 5, 2009

Empty Words Comments

Rating: 4.1

you called me darling
but you caused me pain
you told me you loved me
but was it all in vain?
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lil miss
COMMENTS
Nicole Balbuena 18 February 2010

This is deep. and thanks for the comment, btw :) This is kinda like half of a verse, you should continue...

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John Lyday 09 June 2009

Nothing sappy here. Good rhyme and well crafted. You conveyed the emotion very well.

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Sandra Martyres 05 June 2009

Lovely piece, full of emotion 10

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Chey King 05 June 2009

Wow... I'm speechless... AMAZING! ! ! 10+++++++++++

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