Wednesday, November 9, 2011

Empty Wholeness Comments

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In the blood of the empty, I do seek a wholeness,
A self worth, that my meager Crimson cannot fill,
A hole within my chest,
where the organ of love should reside,
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Ebi Robert 10 November 2011

what is there to say when a poem carries more than it takes to read.

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Felix John 10 November 2011

A well written poem.good choice of words and clearly brought out meaning.keep it up.

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Shamba Kaunda 09 November 2011

wow thinking beyond yo age nice poem i rily love this...well done

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Stefanie Fontker 09 November 2011

I love the title of this one, interesting oxymoron. Beautiful content behind an amazing title. Great work.

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Jacqui Broad 09 November 2011

Lovely poem, lovely comments, as well... I saw a picture of seeking the one to fill the hole caused by heartache. Someone to bring peacefulness and wholesomeness. Then again, it might mean something totally different. Eitherway, it is a great poem!

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Dave Walker 09 November 2011

A great poem. Really like it. A good write about not loving, or been scared to love. Take a look at my poem called, let me love somebody, Its my take on having an empty heart.

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Eric Cockrell 09 November 2011

the search for wholeness brings about wholeness, in slow painful seasons turning...time will be your friend! good poem!

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