Empty Valley Comments

Great poem, without love life can be a very empty place.

I LOVED THIS UNEXPECTED TENDERNESS - this is another persuasive evocation of tenderness which I find very inspiring. Kindness and tenderness are closely related, they both express a depth of feeling which cannot be faked, which carries an admirable sincerity into the world. This is what I call a Blessed Poem, Cigeng. It has a Taoist quality of confidence that natural virtues and spontaneous good will will prevail. And we so need this hope you offer us.

Unexpected tenderness! With the muse of love and life. Nice work.

A stunning beautiful piece, just like your poem, is a piece of art! . Your word gouache had me running for my dictionary, and as I suspected, it has a French origin, hahaha! Really loved the subtlety and nuances in your poem, an insightful, zen-like imagery. Thank you for sharing, Cigeng.

Pretending it was your gentle brush Stroking my cheeks I loved this unexpected tenderness standing on the canvas, your brush, your tenderness, your caress, your love your romantic touch which leads me into erotics.......... nice poem. lovely images. ohhh i like it very much. dev