Sunday, January 12, 2025

Empty Tanks, Shattered Hearts Comments

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The world is running dry, an aching sigh
as humanity's tank stands vacant, a hollow why
where gas runs out and emotions are crowned,
we've lost the spark that fueled our hearts and souls
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M. Asim Nehal
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Panagiota Romios 14 January 2025

This theme is ever presnt onn pietry sites. My own opinion on this, it's just an opinion I don't stand for being a beacon of truth or anything., is that people see evil as good and good as evil.

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 12 January 2025

We have everything but we have no human being! We changed much in the poetic words showing the welfare path but right now we need to change phisically.

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Pallab Chaudhury 12 January 2025

Beautifully crafted one going deep into the hard reality of the current time... With best wishes/ PC

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Deepak S S 12 January 2025

Yes we are in the race to outsmart others. Humanity is put to shame and attention is diverted to political and economical things.

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